Everything that Rises Must Converge part two

This story was a good read. I how Julian kept going back & forth with himself in his head. It was like he was trying to find ways to pick at his mother but in a funny way. He jokes about bringing a black women home to meet his mom or having a black doctor to take care of his mother knowing how she feels about black people. Well at the end of the story his mother is just laying down on the ground and nothing more was said. So we had to create a part two to this story. My part was nothing like the original story. " Julian called for help, it had seem to be too late to help his mother. She had died on the sidewalk. A few days later, her funeral had took place. Julian made sure that only black people showed up. As he walked in the church, he had woman by his side. The woman turned out to be a black woman. I'm sure that his mother was turning in her grave."